Moreover... even ordinary people can see that this illustration is not simple! The moment I saw the illustration, I had only one feeling, that is - stunning! Illustrations that are impossible to look away from! The picture seems to be composed of simple lines, but it reveals the passionate effect of a nuclear bomb explosion... It seems as if the blood in my body can't help but boil! Simply put, it's full of middle school style! This made Gokou Ruri very satisfied. "Well, the fantasy combination of Maya and Lucifer is described so poorly with obscure words. Lucifer's energetic top and Maya's tsundere bottom are the best. Is she just another superficial woman..." Gogen Ruri, who was still in a state of surprise, now had an unhappy look on her face. "Don't expose your corrupted mind in front of me. It's okay to be a rotten girl, but you are a rotten man a thousand times more disgusting than them!"
Hanyu Mochizuki shrugged and said nonchalantly: "This should suit the taste of the public. Even if I don't mention it, others will talk about it. It's better for me to be the first person in this area." "If you are so good at imagining, why don't you put yourself in the situation?" The corners of Gogen Ruri's mouth gradually curled up, with a sneer on her face. Hanyu Mochizuki immediately waved his hands, with a firm look on his face: "No! I want to be the master of the Crystal Palace!" Crystal Palace? A series of question marks appeared in Gokou Ruri's head at first, and she looked up at Hanyu Mochizuki's expression, and soon understood the true meaning of his words. The sneer on her pretty face became more obvious. Illustrations are good paintings, but illustrators are not necessarily good painters. What a complete pervert! "What an incredible belief. In reality, boys only dare to think about it in their hearts but not speak it out. You are a respectable man. I am quite surprised that you can speak out the true evil and bestial desires." "Hehe~ There's nothing to hide! On the one hand, I am content and obedient to my own wishes, and on the other hand, I can say that I am forced to do so. I probably feel a mixture of emotions~" Hanyu Mochizuki had a smug look on his face with a hint of sigh. The expression is quite rich. He didn't care at all about the scumbag look that Gogen Ruri gave him. Yes. In Gokou Ruri's mind... Hanyu Mochizuki has temporarily upgraded from "pervert" to "scumbag". Gogen Ruri's favorability is decreasing rapidly... After a period of time. The drinks had already been served, and Hanyu Mochizuki slowly put down the book covered with a dark black cloth.
Gogen Ruri had a smiling face, but a hint of alienation was faintly visible. The girl simply asked Hanyu Mochizuki about his feelings about reading: "I wanted to ask you to read some setting materials in advance, but I'd better leave it until next time when I remember. What did you feel when you read it for the first time?" As Hanyu Mochizuki said, it is embarrassing to have a novel you wrote read in person. But Gogen Ruri still wants to ask the first reader's opinion. And Hanyu Mochizuki lived up to her expectations. The frivolous smile that was originally on his face suddenly disappeared, and in the blink of an eye it turned into a painful twitch. His face was twitching! Very fast and rich facial expression! and so. Wu Geng Liuli also had a bad premonition in her heart... Chapter 59: Objective Suggestions now. There was a brief silence. An expression of pain and twitching suddenly appeared on Hanyu Mochizuki's face. All of them are deliberately stating something very obvious. Gokou Ruri gritted her teeth, clenched her fists, and stared at Hanyu Mochizuki. "Although I don't really want to call what I wrote a novel, I still want to listen carefully to your dissatisfaction with the novel I wrote. I sincerely ask for your correction and guidance..." Hanyu Mochizuki forced himself to resist the urge to cover his throat immediately in order to cushion the impact of endless despair. Almost poisoned to death! It is rare to see Maschera's secondary creation doujinshi being so badly written. And if I have read this book without missing a single word, I am definitely a unique good man! Hanyu Mochizuki pondered for a moment. “You should have learned some writing techniques, so the switching of viewpoints, flashbacks, and the use of various punctuation marks are all very good. The description of the battle is a bit grandiose. If possible, try to use some appropriate language to replace it…” Although the chatter during the fight is a bit annoying, but the scene is so grand? Are you asking me to see the scenery or to watch the fight? "The current writing trend is 'few words in paragraphs'. Your 'many words in paragraphs' is indeed not very friendly to other readers." Hanyu Mochizuki smiled slightly, looking humble and polite. This fucking black and shitty page is more than 90% text. Will I die if I add too many line breaks? "If you want to make money with this novel, you can try to change it to a simple and clear setting and a clear and easy-to-understand writing style. The characters you create should also try to maintain their main personality traits. Be as friendly to readers as possible... After all, if more people buy it, even if you don't make money, at least more people will understand your novel." There are enough Chinese characters in it. It is not a problem for Hanyu Mochizuki to read it, but it may not be the case for most poor students in society. Add to that the obscure expression techniques, the weird and long-winded settings, the broken characters and the stupid and suffocating operations in the later stages...it is definitely a super work that is meant for self-satisfaction!
Gogen Ruri had a calm expression. He just kept looking at Hanyu Mochizuki's face very carefully. Only after he finished speaking did a hint of understanding appear on her delicate face. "It's hard, isn't it? It's hard to endure it, isn't it?" Gogen Ruri smiled, "It's really hard to control your mouth and not say what's in your heart." "What a shame! I can tell what you're thinking just by looking at your face. You should change this habit in the future." "Ah, really?" Hanyu Mochizuki was immediately shocked and couldn't help but touch his handsome face. "As expected! I'm honest and handsome, so it's hard for me to lie!" "A handsome man like me, the only one in the world, is indeed a rare treasure. I suddenly fell deeply in love with myself!" Gogen Ruri lowered her eyes, too lazy to pay attention to Hanyu Mochizuki who was in "narcissistic mode". Be patient and wait for someone to finish speaking for a while. Only then did Gokou Ruri sigh meaningfully. "If you had kept a calm expression when you gave me those nice suggestions just now, my impression of you might have changed a little bit." Hearing this, Hanyu Mochizuki had a provocative expression on his face, as if he was asking for a beating. He waved his hand casually: "I don't need the so-called "favorability"! I don't have the kind of favorability that makes you fall in love with me at once. Please let me decline. I don't want to cause unnecessary misunderstandings." With a dull expression, Gogen Ruri put the cloth-bound books on the table into her backpack. After sizing up Hanyu Mochizuki's face for a long while, he responded, "Based on your appearance, it's probably hard for a girl to fall in love with you at first sight. If you can be more serious, there might be a small chance." to be frank. Gokou Ruri was not at all touched by this boy who had all kinds of facial expressions on his face almost all the time. If there is, it is probably the so-called "dark power rampage". "Alas, I feel that your novel is not worthy of my illustrations. Then it's better for you to keep it for your own enjoyment and don't sell it at events. Otherwise, hehe, you will feel what despair is." Hanyu Mochizuki was beaming with joy. A look filled with resentment and hatred swept towards Hanyu Mochizuki fiercely. "You look like a disgusting dog. It almost makes me want to kill you right now!" Gokou Ruri turned her head away, resisting the urge to look at Hanyu Mochizuki. Of course she knew what Hanyu Mochizuki was talking about. They really used Hanyu Mochizuki’s illustrations… Events like "buy an illustration and get toilet paper for free" have a 100% chance of happening to her. Gogen Ruri had to admit it. What kind of chemical reaction will occur when low-quality literary works are combined with high-quality exquisite illustrations? "If your writing style is more refined, and you follow my suggestions to improve it, and then write a book based on the most popular settings, you may be able to earn some royalties in your lifetime." Hanyu Mochizuki still had a smile on his face and tried to make a suggestion in a somewhat sincere tone.
Gogen Ruri didn't say anything. He just narrowed his eyes and stared at Hanyu Mochizuki. It's almost written on his little face: "How dare you teach me a lesson?" Hanyu Mochizuki stretched his neck, which was stiff from reading for a long time, and said casually: "It's your business whether you want to listen or not. I was stupid to accompany you for such a long time." Not only did I spend some money on a drink, but I also read some pretty rubbish toilet paper literature. Most importantly, they gave very objective advice, but the people who should have been grateful had a stupid expression on their faces, which was really heartbreaking. The young man named Hanyu Mochizuki is really kind. God should reward this handsome and helpful man as soon as possible! Otherwise it's really unreasonable~ A glare was directed directly at Hanyu Mochizuki. Gokou Ruri crossed her arms and looked at Hanyu Mochizuki with disdain: "Pervert! You should not say some things in front of the person concerned. No wonder Fujiwara-san always yells "You are destined to be lonely all your life" and so on. " After careful observation by Gogen Ruri. She obviously discovered that— As soon as this guy puts his hand on his chin or suddenly squints his eyes, he will enter a strange state. In other words, it forms a special world in itself. He started talking to himself, completely ignoring the situation outside. That is. Even if Gokou Ruri wanted to get angry, she had to wait until Hanyu Mochizuki finished saying what was in her heart. This is such a headache-inducing perversion! Although I am a little angry that the work I worked so hard on was being wantonly belittled, the facts are the facts. Gogen Ruri would not act unreasonably. What's more, the suggestions just mentioned by Hanyu Mochizuki are indeed very pertinent. She had no reason to be angry. Even if he was really being unreasonable, he wouldn't do it to this stranger pervert! Yes, it is like that! ps: Please give me some recommendations. It makes me feel very tired when playing alone. Chapter 60 Chapter Trying to catch a carrot... Lazily yawned.
Hanyu Mochizuki looked around the cafe boredly. Compared to the "Cafe Stile" where I occasionally work part-time, this place is completely inferior! Right.